I am a Year 8 student at Redhill Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kereru Whanau and my teachers are Miss Kereopa and Matua Cloud. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, 30 May 2019
My Unique Holiday Recount
I have learned that making a recount needs to have Paragraph
to make my story more interesting and unique to
read.
The best part about my Holiday was when My family had our Family
Reunion because it was challenging to meet other Family in my family that I haven't meet before.
Give some ideas for next time or ask a question if you want to
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This is My Holiday
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